Haiku

WELCOME!

You are about to experience the entire body of haiku written by players of Meat-MUD for the October 2000 haiku quest. I would like to thank and praise all entrants for their creativity, and tell you that I think the finished volume of work is very cool!

For the competition element, I was the primary judge here, but I have invited a surprise guest judge to also comment on entries.

Everyone please stand now and welcome... LORIEN!

How is the material arranged? There are 2 pages here, both containing all of the haiku. The haiku are arranged alphabetically by author. So you will see the player's name, then all of the haiku they have written in succession.

On this first page, the haiku are presented 'as is', without comments from judges or mention of awards they have won, so that you can read and interpret them for yourself.

The 2nd page contains all of the haiku again, this time with commentary from the judges and prize information. Comments labelled 'B' are from myself (Bloomer) and an 'L' denotes comments from Lorien.

You dig? Now read on and enjoy. At the end of this page, click the scroll to move to the 2nd page.

--Bloomer (October 15th 2000)


APOLLO

Happy day in Thalos
You have been summoned!
Not so happy day...

Signets and beaks and Cloaks Oh my
Oh why can't i ever find any

AUTOLYCUS

Killin' Harpies at work
customer needs assistance..
oh boy, i lost!

BLOOMER

Justice for all
a flash of blue light
takes her away

locked gate yearning
Dracula's signet inside
the castle beckons

blue ice
this heart-faced beauty
Lirain

DAIMUN

a dragon looming
quick, running down the mountain
away to safety

DATOWER

As a predator
I attack...DEMOLISH!!!
You're dead. He cheats again.

Luscious red berries
insipid and useless for mankind.
What's the point?

The weary player
sees a silver disc vanish
into nothingness.

Why do they haunt me?
Sleek shadows stalk me,
stealing possessions. Why me?

DEDSUNE

Questing had begun.
It was a dark and stormy night.
NO CARRIER - Damn.

Mighty Beholder.
Never looked friendly, indeed.
I'll be in western.

Eye of Perception.
Long is the journey to fight.
Heads will roll.

Stuck in gluey webs.
Arachnos does not bind me.
Enchanted, dead again.

DERIK

KILL! KILL! KILL! KILL! KILL!
DIE! DIE! I love MUDs. DIE! DIE!
Blood, guts, gore. KILL! KILL!

"The land of shortcuts
'Can i have the dirs to circ?'
Imms, chars, MeadMud, fun."

all the imms are great
bloomer's trivias are cool
I love MUDs, nice meat

FIREMAN

Am I to be one...
Of the Laborous school work?
Or eternal MUD?

IAD

Death has come
It has looted me dry
Revenge will come

Many roses will sprout
some will stand tall
most will fall

Friends come and friends go
unfortunatly my friends blow
they killed me

a hero emerges
he has met his destiny
he is me

INGOLD

We walk through sancs maze
turning and twisting we go
searching but then caught

Ever sure we are
the best equipment we have
then oblivion

KOCHANSKI

you have been KILLED!
get my corpse! I've lost my equip,
oh, detect invis.

Argh Egam! Eeek Hiev!
dimension phase, Ack webbed!
Lie still, you are DEAD.

Western chamber,
A Shieldmaiden has arrived.
you feel better!

KHRONO

adept of all
Fharlanghn almighty healer
bring us resurrection!

the land of meat
on it lands a fly
grab a piece

newbie stumbles
slips and slides over mud
the Temple of Thalos...

RAZIEL

The Beholder's gaze
will send fear into your heart
Beware his wrath fools

As an assassin
I will live and I will die
But won't ever stop

RED

Horatio gets killed,
what message appears?
Suffer miss room

DIE! Beholder DIE!
Well, guess I can't kill him
You have been webbed, Crap!

REFLUX

Temple of Thalos
newbies' enemy
you have been killed

SCALES

I slap the mili
i hear an order
i am slapped

I lie there dead
no one helps me
my items and all go

in the water
i sink to see
a barracuda
to eat me

In the sky
over the heavens
i fall and die

SEIRALAIN

Shower newbie with gifts
The newbie is now a hero
Yet still a newbie

Buy a copper bracelet
Oh No! 'Tis cursed.
Into the bag.
Begone!

TRICKYONE

Assassins sneaking
Angry mobs round every turn
The Dark Side of Mud

WIFIDI

quenched sword
whining I will be forever
why I logged on never

Will of steel
facing death
which will yield

steaming corpse
do I see myself
do I smell

WILDCHILD

bloomer bloomer blue
mer bloomer bloomer bloomer
bloomer bloomer blue

XAVIOR

Strolling through Thalos.
Oh no! Its the Beholder!
Lie still, you are DEAD!!

I stare in the hole.
Blackness surrounds my body
SPLAT, no equipment!

The twin suns rise again
Metal clashing in the woods
Blood spills on the ground



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