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Haiku |
WELCOME!
You are about to experience the entire body of haiku written by players of Meat-MUD for the October 2000 haiku quest. I would like to thank and praise all entrants for their creativity, and tell you that I think the finished volume of work is very cool!
For the competition element, I was the primary judge here, but I have invited a surprise guest judge to also comment on entries.
Everyone please stand now and welcome... LORIEN!
How is the material arranged? There are 2 pages here, both containing all of the haiku. The haiku are arranged alphabetically by author. So you will see the player's name, then all of the haiku they have written in succession.
On this first page, the haiku are presented 'as is', without comments from judges or mention of awards they have won, so that you can read and interpret them for yourself.
The 2nd page contains all of the haiku again, this time with commentary from the judges and prize information. Comments labelled 'B' are from myself (Bloomer) and an 'L' denotes comments from Lorien.
You dig? Now read on and enjoy. At the end of this page, click the scroll to move to the 2nd page.
--Bloomer (October 15th 2000)
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APOLLO |
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Happy day in Thalos
You have been summoned!
Not so happy day... |
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Signets and beaks and Cloaks Oh my
Oh why can't i ever find any |
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AUTOLYCUS |
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Killin' Harpies at work
customer needs assistance..
oh boy, i lost! |
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BLOOMER |
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Justice for all
a flash of blue light
takes her away |
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locked gate yearning
Dracula's signet inside
the castle beckons |
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blue ice
this heart-faced beauty
Lirain |
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DAIMUN |
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a dragon looming
quick, running down the mountain
away to safety |
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DATOWER |
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As a predator
I attack...DEMOLISH!!!
You're dead. He cheats again. |
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Luscious red berries
insipid and useless for mankind.
What's the point? |
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The weary player
sees a silver disc vanish
into nothingness. |
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Why do they haunt me?
Sleek shadows stalk me,
stealing possessions. Why me? |
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DEDSUNE |
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Questing had begun.
It was a dark and stormy night.
NO CARRIER - Damn. |
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Mighty Beholder.
Never looked friendly, indeed.
I'll be in western. |
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Eye of Perception.
Long is the journey to fight.
Heads will roll. |
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Stuck in gluey webs.
Arachnos does not bind me.
Enchanted, dead again. |
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DERIK |
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KILL! KILL! KILL! KILL! KILL!
DIE! DIE! I love MUDs. DIE! DIE!
Blood, guts, gore. KILL! KILL! |
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"The land of shortcuts
'Can i have the dirs to circ?'
Imms, chars, MeadMud, fun." |
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all the imms are great
bloomer's trivias are cool
I love MUDs, nice meat |
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FIREMAN |
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Am I to be one...
Of the Laborous school work?
Or eternal MUD? |
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IAD |
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Death has come
It has looted me dry
Revenge will come |
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Many roses will sprout
some will stand tall
most will fall |
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Friends come and friends go
unfortunatly my friends blow
they killed me |
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a hero emerges
he has met his destiny
he is me |
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INGOLD |
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We walk through sancs maze
turning and twisting we go
searching but then caught |
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Ever sure we are
the best equipment we have
then oblivion |
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KOCHANSKI |
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you have been KILLED!
get my corpse! I've lost my equip,
oh, detect invis. |
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Argh Egam! Eeek Hiev!
dimension phase, Ack webbed!
Lie still, you are DEAD. |
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Western chamber,
A Shieldmaiden has arrived.
you feel better! |
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KHRONO |
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adept of all
Fharlanghn almighty healer
bring us resurrection! |
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the land of meat
on it lands a fly
grab a piece |
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newbie stumbles
slips and slides over mud
the Temple of Thalos... |
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RAZIEL |
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The Beholder's gaze
will send fear into your heart
Beware his wrath fools |
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As an assassin
I will live and I will die
But won't ever stop |
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RED |
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Horatio gets killed,
what message appears?
Suffer miss room |
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DIE! Beholder DIE!
Well, guess I can't kill him
You have been webbed, Crap! |
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REFLUX |
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Temple of Thalos
newbies' enemy
you have been killed |
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SCALES |
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I slap the mili
i hear an order
i am slapped |
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I lie there dead
no one helps me
my items and all go |
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in the water
i sink to see
a barracuda
to eat me |
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In the sky
over the heavens
i fall and die |
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SEIRALAIN |
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Shower newbie with gifts
The newbie is now a hero
Yet still a newbie |
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Buy a copper bracelet
Oh No! 'Tis cursed.
Into the bag.
Begone! |
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TRICKYONE |
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Assassins sneaking
Angry mobs round every turn
The Dark Side of Mud |
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WIFIDI |
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quenched sword
whining I will be forever
why I logged on never |
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Will of steel
facing death
which will yield |
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steaming corpse
do I see myself
do I smell |
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WILDCHILD |
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bloomer bloomer blue
mer bloomer bloomer bloomer
bloomer bloomer blue |
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XAVIOR |
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Strolling through Thalos.
Oh no! Its the Beholder!
Lie still, you are DEAD!! |
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I stare in the hole.
Blackness surrounds my body
SPLAT, no equipment! |
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The twin suns rise again
Metal clashing in the woods
Blood spills on the ground |
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